Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
The growth of the society is deeply linked to the
rules and regulations set up by the authorities. If there are no
laws and rules then this would an increase in crime rates and
no economic growth of the country.
To begin with, If there were no laws and regulations given
Out by the government then then the society would observe a
Increase in crime rates. A various number of people would commit
Crime and not consider the consequences as there are no laws
To punish them. For instance, if there are no laws assigned
Regarding the ownership of guns, anyone could buy a gun and
Misuse this weapon which would result in many deaths or injuries.
Even if it was unintentional this would ruin many lives. Hence, rules
And regulations are to be considered.
Most of the Individuals make wrong decisions if they could do anything
They want. In order for a society to succeed in popularity as well
As economically rules are to be allotted. The economic growth is
Dependent on the population of that society and their lifestyle.
For instance, if there is no rule with regard to paying taxes, a
Numerous number would ignore it because there is no
Repercussions. Therefore, without the taxes and funds a country
Would not survive in this world.
To conclude, if there are no laws it would cause growth in crime rates
As well as no growth of the nation. So, I certainly agree to the
Statement that a nation is associated with the policies and
Laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84046692607 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6424044011 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486381322957 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4684811537 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169761494907 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634577915776 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675397648228 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472875498752 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528095384973 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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