You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house
• say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend
• suggest when and where you could meet your friend next
Dear Marshall,
I hope this letter finds you well. I would like to once again congratulate you on your new house.
I sincerely loved the house. One feature that absolutely stunned me was the Chandelier. The Chandilier stood majestically atop the living room, giving it a luxury feel. The medieval chair alongside the firepit was a cherry on the cake. Anyone sitting on the chair is bound to feel like a Royal.
The Zen garden at the back of your house is in contrast with the theme inside the house. Inside where you feel like a Royal, as soon as you step out, you feel the tranquility hit you and pull your feet to the ground. There is no words to describe how relaxed I was when I meditated in the garden. It was the most memorable moment of my visit.
Ever since I got back, I have been working on building my own zen garden. I would appreciate your take on it. I am having a small gathering of close family and friends at my place and would sincerely appreciate if you could come along with you family.
Yours truly
John Oliver
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are no words'?
Suggestion: There are no words
...t you and pull your feet to the ground. There is no words to describe how relaxed I was when I me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38341968912 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36345547234 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616580310881 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8492281434 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8666666667 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33238204099 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906323743598 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963227004093 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191354872939 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114573397326 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.