In comtemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, there has been an engaging notion depicting the picture of an ideal education of which points out that people should have an equal chance of pursuing higher education regardless of gender. Thus, every major of colleges and universities are advised to welcome the same range of students of both sexes. This essay partly agrees with the aforementioned trend and the reasons will be elucidated further.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that there are a number of majors in which men have more advantages and are more suitable than their female counterparts. Take studying to become a pilot for example. Naturally, females are more physically vulnerable and less mentally prepared for unwanted situations, hence, only a few of those can work a concentration-oriented and mental-centric job like pilot.
On the other hand, it is believed that female students also have an exponential reservoir of knowledge like their male counterparts. Society has witnessed a host of astounding inventions and intellectual advancements created by women like the resounding scientist Marie Curie or the profound author Helen Keller. Not only do these significant development made by women happened in the past but nowadays there are also a number of talented female leaders in many fields of the world, such as Angela Merkel or Hillary Clinton. Those people may not only have the same enormous impact on the public as males but also tend to receive more support from society by virtues of their elegance and dignity.
To recapitulate, although females are less suitable to participate in a host of university majors due to their higher level of vulnerability, I somewhat partial to this trend of having equal acceptance for students of both sexes in colleges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...wanted situations, hence, only a few of those can work a concentration-oriented and menta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18456375839 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02747988117 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7549648719 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204539891056 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637954992455 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421928001504 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108458109541 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403380084234 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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