With the development of technology these days, more and more people chose home-learning or home-working instead of the traditional way, which is believed to occur due to the affordability and convenience of automation. This development not only brings significant chances to study overseas but also gives people initiative in time monitor to work effectively.
The advancement of technology has open numerous methods to connect with other countries or religions overseas. Learning at home with internet support helps us approach international teachers, learners, and different educations. We not only make good relationships with people overseas but also has an enormous knowledge which we got from them. For example, joining zoom international classes give you chances to learn from other religions' methods and know a lot of interesting learners who share the same goals as you do.
Learning or working with others requires rules which you have to follow, nevertheless, working at home does not need your observance. You can choose to follow your ways and times as well. Moreover, you know always know the most accurate methods to develop yourself. Working at home gives you an initiative at the time for your best result. For example, a home-learner has decisions in choosing a suitable course with their ability, such as learning from Youtube videos, signing in the online lesson,...etc.
In conclusion, home-learning and working bring a countless number of benefits such as the chances to connect with multiple methods all over the world, choosing individual measures to improve the best,... These reasons have shown the positive of one of the most common technological results.
- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person 84
- Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success while others believe that it depends on other factors Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person in an Australian university 61
- Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible Do you think it is a negative or a positive development 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ube videos, signing in the online lesson,...etc. In conclusion, home-learning and...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... individual measures to improve the best,... These reasons have shown the positive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41064638783 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02237603547 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1389769252 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22311843523 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076686397908 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562470969443 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140173942062 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554838027643 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.