A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. other people want a center for research in agriculture(farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use Specific reasons in your recommendation.
I belong from a country where most people relied on farming. In my opinion, a research center for farming will always be a good idea. And I hold this opinion for some reasons which are as follows.
The first reason is that in my country people 90% of people are getting their income source from farming but they still use the old farming technics. As the result they ended up with less income, and more investment. In that case, if university is builds a research center for the farming, they will able to educate them about new farming technics. Moreover, they can educate them about the hybrid crops and different types of vegetables. For example, the farming with sprinkles water and how to provide a sufficient water to different crops so they will get enough water and produces healthy grains.
Secondly, the farming research center will help the farmers to take a right decision about what kind of crop they can grow in their land. This is a main issue where farming gets failed in my country because most of time farmer grows a crop on unsuitable land and then after it get drained out. So, for farming the right crop on suitable land is important. That is the reason they need more knowledge about the crops and the land. For instance, here most of the farmers get Soyabean crop, but not all land suitable for this crop, so in research center the they first identify they sustainability of land and they suggest farmer which crop is more efficient to grow on their land and how they get profit from it.
The final reason is that, research center will examine the land and spread the awareness about the different pesticides to use to kill insects on the crop. Because most of pesticide maybe killed the insects but the harmful chemicals which are present in it harms the land and decrease the original minerals. In the result that land will no longer useful to produce crops. And now a days this is become a big issue in my country, research center will help them to find a solution from this problem.
Moreover, the students who study the agriculture will get an opportunity to work in this research center and learn a lot of things from experience people. Also, it will become motivation for future student to enroll for agriculture courses.
In conclusion, developing the agriculture research center will help the different ways and also encourage students to enroll for agriculture course.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: sufficient water
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Suggestion: used
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Suggestion: nowadays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73571428571 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39691198729 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445238095238 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4745500215 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.45 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285201563817 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10745115658 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898519346937 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199319547457 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618115126521 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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