Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school, while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss views on both sides and give your opinions.
There is no doubt that art can play an important role in the development of a child. Although some people believe that including art in the curriculum is not worth their time, others think that art is a necessary subject at school.
In my view, those who believe studying art is a waste of time might think that it does not help children achieve success. This is because some artists find difficulty in developing their careers and making a living. For example, a painter can struggle to sell his art. Therefore, some adults want their children to focus on learning other more important subjects such as math or science at school. It will likely result in a successful career such as business, medicine, or architecture.
On the other hand, some believe that teaching art at school is very essential because it provides necessary life skills. The reason is that by studying art students can develop skills like patience, creativity, and more. For instance, completing a project and earning a reward for hard work can build their way of thinking. Hence, if these skills are not taught at school, it may affect the overall development of children badly.
In conclusion, while it can be true that teaching art at school is time-consuming and worthless, I passionately believe that spending time on it may help develop essential life skills to achieve success in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90557939914 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69647468078 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9037273279 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34524095493 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120694935576 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963402561786 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221702018009 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597117106503 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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