Write about the following topic:
Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, with the rapid development of the internet people can access the latest news. Nonetheless, this change does not bring only benefit to people. It can bring negativity to all members of society. This essay will discuss the negative impact and give some possible solutions in this essay.
To begin with, the prime impact of the internet is that people can become isolated, less alienated, reduce their sociability and intensity of family and friendship. There was the fact that those who spend more time on social media tend to be less sociable than those who do not. The reason is they spend most of their time interacting with the interface and those who are addict to the games will consider that this is the second world. For instance, the USA is the prime example this is the country where the internet becomes a daily thing to them, teenager considered that using social media is far more interesting than interacting with people and because of that, they become more isolated from the world outside
On the other hand, we can lose our personal information on the internet. when social media have phenomenal progress. Our information can be seen by anyone and it becomes a luxury item for commercial companies, hackers and be able to sell to the needs people. Conserve, people did not pay enough attention to that issue. One good illustration of this is Facebook which is the largest social platform in the world with 2.7 billion users all over the world. Conversely, their security for private information is a big duel.
In conclusion, I believe that the rapid development of the internet has a negative influence on society such as isolation in adolescence. Moreover, our private information can have a big influence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...nteracting with the interface and those who are addict to the games will consider that ...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...r personal information on the internet. when social media have phenomenal progress. ...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r personal information on the internet. when social media have phenomenal progress. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95563139932 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62211124677 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4637219685 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130049859503 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042780958676 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368728992454 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784356160118 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295170911751 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.