Many think that in today’s world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, modernity has altered lifestyles and work habits, making it difficult to maintain health and fitness. However, as some people believed, it depended on whether an individual spends their time actively or passively. This essay will argue that both views, as stated in the statement, are correct.
To begin, life places a great deal of demands on a single guy. However, he values other things more than his health and is thus unable to maintain a healthy lifestyle. However, if he invests a little time in his health, it will pay off in the long run. Additionally, there are a slew of contemporary technologies that contribute to a lack of exercise. For instance, research indicates that a man spends two hours of his daily life on social media rather than on the playground, and youngsters get used to these online activities, therefore squandering their golden years of youth.
On the other side of the divide, individuals believe fitness is a non-issue, that it is a way of life, and that they are accustomed to regular activity. For example, older adults who remain active and appear younger than their years are accustomed to morning walks from an early age. Second, they are unaware of contemporary societal trends and beliefs, and they generally consume nutritious foods in their daily lives.
In conclusion, keeping health is a significant challenge for those who work and spend their time on current social media. Others, on the other hand, exercise everyday and consume nutritious foods rather than junk food. Fitness, in my opinion, is not a problem if individuals begin training in infancy and avoid fast food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
...the long run. Additionally, there are a slew of contemporary technologies that contr...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ia. Others, on the other hand, exercise everyday and consume nutritious foods rather tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00732600733 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7147281058 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5661372032 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125717942479 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382132570838 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285688742426 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727456435547 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171325115774 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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