The costs of medical health care are increasing all the time. Governments are finding it difficult to balance the health care budget.
Should citizens be totally responsible for their own health costs and take out private health insurance, or is it better to have a comprehensive health care system which provides free health services for all? Discuss.
Due to the increasing cost of healthcare which causes the difficulty for many governments to pay the entire amount, some people argue that citizens should not be given any free healthcare and should buy their own health insurance. I believe that free medical healthcare should only be provided to those who are too poor to afford it.
To commence with, those who are able should hold responsibility for healthcare expenses and purchase private health insurance. Not all nations can afford to pay for every patient’s treatments as well as the salaries of thousands of hospital’s staff. For example, in some developing countries, the government has to address several other problems including education, environment and unemployment so the national budget cannot accommodate free healthcare for the whole population. Moreover, private health insurance will be worthwhile in emergency situations. If they get sick, they may have to pay very little or even nothing at all. Privately insured people are also entitled to special benefits such as skipping the waiting list and choosing their preffered doctor.
Furthermore, I believe that fee-free healthcare should only be doled out to a special group of people. To be specific, those who are living in poverty may not have enough money to pay for hospitalisation, which may prevent them from going to the hospital. In the long run, this may lead their health to deteriorate, which does much harm. Those people have to suffer from adversities and disadvantages in their life so free healthcare should be provided to encourage them to take care of their own health.
To conclude, only providing free healthcare for poor and disabled residents can help reduce the burden on national budgets and hospitals and at the same time, it can also ensure that everyone gets their health taken care of properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19732441472 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84158147789 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8079971364 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337471674016 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119213751394 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818853904674 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205990569224 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260601739633 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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