Nowadays a large number of people are going abroad for either carrier or educational opportunities while some peoples believe that there are abundant benefits however there are numerous difficulties faced by them, in this essay I will discuss both sides benefits as well as issues while preferring other countries regarding the study or career-oriented decisions
Advantage-
Firstly peoples prefer to travel abroad for getting new opportunities and getting to know individuals from other cultures, making new friends and exploring new things, also experiencing a whole new environment in terms of scenic beauty, weather, and lifestyle, in short, the whole way of living is changed
Further moving forward, the most important reason that attracts individuals to come overseas is higher salary which leads to good quality of living, it is often seen that if someone is considering migrating or studying in different country is probably because he/she is expecting a better job opportunity with good compensation and going overseas is a great option.
However, some peoples face problems while finding jobs and starting their carrier from scratch, as similar is the case with the students they to find the education system different from what they had in their own country, apart from this finding a stable or part-time job is a tedious task even the daily expenses are an important factor to consider.
Moving on, most of the peoples find language as a barrier while coming to settle abroad as the culture is different and language is an essential factor even though some countries have English as first language countries which English as their second language it is intimidating to start learning totally different language
In conclusion, despite the benefits and lifestyle traveling abroad offer we must take into consideration the disadvantages of starting life from scratch and language barrier, in my view these benefits outweigh the disadvantages, and I would myself prefer traveling abroad as a decent option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Nowadays a large number of people are going abroad for either carr...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ssay I will discuss both sides benefits as well as issues while preferring other countries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, in short, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38364779874 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83619209537 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 106.0 20.2975951904 522% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 287.567190216 49.4020404114 582% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 570.666666667 106.682146367 535% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 106.0 20.7667163134 510% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 43.3333333333 7.06120827912 614% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266119419077 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162537482522 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619681404579 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120434942483 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790565762647 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 56.9 13.0946893788 435% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -44.57 50.2224549098 -89% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.8 11.3001002004 405% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.92 8.58950901804 150% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.4 10.1190380762 439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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