nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent on work is very high. Some of them are under high stress and ignore the other parts of life. What are the causes and effects?
Nowadays some adults indeed tend to work longer than do other activities. this causes high depression and tiredness. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon and some impacts on the society
Firstly, society is developing day by day, therefore, human's needs tend to increase significantly so employees need to work harder to maintain their life condiction. For example, workers nowadays need to work hard so they can afford to pay their living costs and their's entertainment. In addition, many companies encourage their employees to do their jobs with high intensity in the workplace to complete office tasks on time and this decreases people's spare time on taking care of their families or doing their hobbies. For example, some people must work until the night before going home so they can't take care of their families.
As a result, these issues bring negative impacts on people's lives. The most noticeable drawback is making them increase stress due to lack of rest. For example, some people who work in offices must sit in a chair more than 12 hours per day and in the long term, it will cause spinal injuries and risk of stroke. Besides, spending lots of time on overtime jobs made the relationship between families weak, for instance, many young couples tend to divorce because they can't balance between work and life.
In conclusion, extended working hours are associated with increasing demands in the workplace, preventing employees from leading a healthy and balanced life. Therefore, I believe governments should enact laws that impose weekly overtime standards for corporations and individuals should aware of how to balance work and life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...til the night before going home so they cant take care of their families. As a resu...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17777777778 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60103387696 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8554683119 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256619983423 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908414167519 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527021256916 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145316139353 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560353107042 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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