The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Cooperation is one of the most important essense of leadership in any field, be it governmental sectors, industries or any other fields. Leader is someone who should listen to the ideas and thought process of his or her team members and take decisions accordingly in a prudent way. Cooperating with others and giving importance to the team members is vital for success of any organization, therefore I mostly agree with the claim that, the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in any sectors or fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
On the other hand, many may disagree with this claim, stating that today's era is led by competition. Life is a race and one should compete with another in order to succeed and rule them. Though, their views may be correct to some extent about the how sense of competition can help a young person to succeed but leadership is not just about self- success, leadership is all about the team success on the whole. Leader is someone how leads the team, people follow them and the system works on their final decisions. If the leader is not cooperative, then the organization can be said be led by dictorship rather than team. Such sector will not be successful in long run and then no amount of competition can bring the position of leadership back .
Cooperation within the team gives a sense of integrity, responsibility and significance to each member of the team. For instance, if we think about a school project in which a team of certain number of students have to design a model, there will be a team lead offcourse, but suppose if that team lead will not listen to the ideas of anyone, will make decisions all my himself and will just try to compete with one another within the team, then the project will not be a successful one, as all the members of the team will loathe him and ultimately, it will harm the purpose of the team and the leader will be failed.
Cooperation within the team also gives a sense of respect to each member. For instance, if any government party leader will not listen to the ideas and thoughts of his member and will just try to have a competition, it will lead to the decline in their seats in the parliament, other government official will hate him because they will feel disrespected. It is important for a leader to respect each and every member of the team. They maybe wrong, but it is their duty to handle the situation with decorum by cooperating with them and finally making the best decision possible without disrespecting anyone's thought.
In conclusion, competition may be important for a person success but cooperation is actually the true and most important aspect of leadership. Leadership within a group without a sense of cooperation does not hold water as this unhealthy competition is dangerous and the young should be aware about this to be a successful leader.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a prudent way" with adverb for "prudent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... members and take decisions accordingly in a prudent way. Cooperating with others and giving imp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...n, not competition. On the other hand, many may disagree with this claim, stating that ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... disagree with this claim, stating that todays era is led by competition. Life is a ra...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...ews may be correct to some extent about the how sense of competition can help a young p...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...an bring the position of leadership back . Cooperation within the team gives a se...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70450097847 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73342617467 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424657534247 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.46925576 60.3974514979 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.411764706 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0588235294 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206238333732 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762377981329 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755171816989 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13281794781 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823437286999 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a prudent way" with adverb for "prudent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... members and take decisions accordingly in a prudent way. Cooperating with others and giving imp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...n, not competition. On the other hand, many may disagree with this claim, stating that ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... disagree with this claim, stating that todays era is led by competition. Life is a ra...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...ews may be correct to some extent about the how sense of competition can help a young p...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...an bring the position of leadership back . Cooperation within the team gives a se...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70450097847 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73342617467 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424657534247 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.46925576 60.3974514979 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.411764706 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0588235294 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206238333732 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762377981329 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755171816989 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13281794781 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823437286999 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.