If a product is good or it meets people needs, people will buy it. So advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is indeed true that if product is good and it covers all the requirements of customers then they will definitely buy that product without seeing the advertisement. However, I believe that advertisement is essential part for marketing of products.
Regarding to those who believe that advertisement of product is nothing more than an entertainment when customers find the right product for them without seeing it. They say that if product is best and if it has every quality and facilities which consumers want in the product then they will purchase it so there is no need of advertisement and it only remain the part of time-pass nothing more.
In contrast, I believe that if the customer will see the ad of any products then they can gain more knowledge about that and also they can choose right product from multiple products and also they can understand the pros and cons of that product. For instance, if a person wants to buy a college bag with some basic facilities and then he/she watch the advertisement of skybags company which provide more facilities as compare to that bag which he/she is going to buy and they can easily differentiate the difference between them and choose the right product for them. There are many advertisements runs from the governments for public to show their new skims, which they starts for citizens. By seeing these type of adverts people can also take advantage of that skims.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...is no need of advertisement and it only remain the part of time-pass nothing more. ...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...dge about that and also they can choose right product from multiple products and also...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...h some basic facilities and then he/she watch the advertisement of skybags company wh...
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Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...lic to show their new skims, which they starts for citizens. By seeing these type of a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, then, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87242798354 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73829894069 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514403292181 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4755268935 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2131570183 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992090036523 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558131409163 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164764546601 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551721902334 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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