In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?
There is widespread concern over recent decline global diversity. In my opinion, the clearest cause for this is human overpopulation and the solutions are can be taken by government.
The primary catalyst for these declining numbers is the growth of human population. The global population is increasing yearly and this has a ramification on natural environment. First and foremost reason is that, humans require homes so they occupy more land and this step become loss for natural habitats of plants and animals. In addition, increment in number of industries. Due to demand of food and other products for large human population, commercial areas consume more and more land and natural resources to complete their demands. Like, cut down numerous forests, drill the land for oil and kill animals for their personal profit and use.
This problem can only tackle by the governments. The governments should generate the strict rules and regulations concerning the habitats of various plant and animal life. They should establish more national parks for animals and trees. A good example for this would be the national parks established in the United states as the beginning of 20th century. Because of increasing demands from industries for land, the government used their vision and established national parks to protect natural habitats for animals and plants. Other countries should use this idea for tackle this issue. The government should start campaigns where citizens can get the information about family management and also start some campaigns for declining of animals and plans, by seeing this individuals can understand the issue and help the government to tackle this issue.
In conclusion, although plants and animals life is at risk because of human population, the government can take some steps to solve this problem.
- Some people think that schools should reward the students who show the best academic results while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discus both views and give your opinion 56
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages 73
- If a product is good or it meets people needs people will buy it So advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining Why do you think this is happening How can this issue be solved 60
- Some people say that instead of preventing climate change we should find a way to live with it Do you agree or disagree 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.316 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6907991378 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2271329108 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219429250962 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875341633449 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589492182508 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152980141522 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336526900571 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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