Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that the best way to have a successful career is to have a job right after high school while others argue it is better for students to attend universities. This essay would shed light on both views before concluding that it is prudent to pursue higher study.
On the one hand, attaining a job after graduating from high school is advantageous for students in some ways. First, young people can gain real experience and improve skills needed for their jobs. Students would need practical experience and necessary knowledge about their jobs in order to progress rapidly in their career rather than bookish knowledge taught at schools. Secondly, working would provide the young with the opportunities to cultivate their interpersonal skills. Youngsters may have to talk with various people from all walks of life, thus improving their communication skills, which would contribute greatly to students' success in their careers.
Despite these arguments above, it would be well-advised to attend universities as they guarantee students stable and promising careers in the future. Some professions require students to have specialized knowledge and skills to get into. For instance, pupils would have to dedicate many years to studying in chemical universities before they could work as professional doctors in hospitals. In addition, as the market job is getting more and more competitive, students would have to obtain qualifications acknowledged by universities in order to have their dream jobs. Students with expertise and sufficient degrees would be more employable, some even stand a good chance of having well-paid jobs. Therefore, it is justifiable to believe that universities allow the young to escalate their career ladder in the future.
In conclusion, although pursuing a job after finish school may seem attractive to a certain extent, I contend that pursuing higher study in universities or colleges would be the ultimate way to have a successful career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39423076923 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89834163005 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6678171102 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232633390851 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848734025758 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835636094183 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172274200452 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865898751173 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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