**The bar chart illustrates population trends globally by percentage from 1950 to 2040.**
**Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.**
the line charts give information on the population distribution and the proportion of three different age groups all over the globe from 1950 to 2040.
overall, it is predicted that the population in central areas and big cities will continue to climb; moreover, the number of people in the 15-60 age group is going to witness a major increase.
the percentage of citizens who live in urban areas saw almost no difference from that of suburb areas in the 50s and the 60s, which was around 9%. however, from the 70s, the figure surged and landed at nearly 20% in 2010. From that point, the figure go up quickly and is predicted to reach a high of 38%, almost 8 times bigger than the proportion that rural regions are expected to hold in the year 2040. in contrast, rural populations remained steady at only 5% from 1950 to 2020, and the figure is expected to levelled at that point in the next 4 decade.
the age distribution indicates that the 15 to 65 age group will soon increase significantly, going from a small proportion of 5% to 35%. the other age groups, on the other hand, showed almost no signs of change and will continue to see similar pattern of 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55450236967 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49430518696 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1504026331 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129809545974 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594716533218 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566736093529 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854050213306 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720192656933 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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