You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Mr. Parkson,
I am writing to you regarding some troublesome issues I faced during my recent stay at the hotel. I belive this time the weather was much colder than expected, so I had hoped for better facilities to overcome the situation, but that was not the case. There was no thermostat installed in my room, unfortunately. Due to which I was not able to manage the temperature inside the room and was restless the whole time.
I had to order several blankets at an extra cost and take hot water baths frequently which was a pain. In spite of shutting of the air-conditioning and stuffing me under blankets, I was not able to feel any warmth in the room whatsoever.
I have been a trusted customer and hence, informing you about the same, so that nobody else faces such a problem. I would like you to kindly check all the rooms on that respective floor and inspect them thoroughly. Also, I believe I should get a refund for the extra charges as the issue was caused because of the hotel's negligence.
Kindly look into it at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Shalaka Thompson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...d during my recent stay at the hotel. I belive this time the weather was much colder than e...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
... as the issue was caused because of the hotels negligence. Kindly look into it at t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, regarding, so, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67010309278 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70745674612 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664948453608 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9779546826 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271472314851 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834665545104 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654322351301 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129989036764 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111286267867 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.