Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every five years.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
These days a vast number of vehicles drive around the cities. This leads to a great deal of problems on the roads. To deal with them some police officers advocate that resiting driving test once in five years should be mandatory. In this essay, I will consider both positive and negatives sides of this approach.
Let us begin with the benefits of this solution. First of all, it can encourage drivers to review traffic rules regularly. People tend to forget regulations on the road while driving so they frequently have a car accident. They would not have such situations if they standed a chance to look through the rules on a regular basis, so retaking the mandatory driving test once in five years supposedly helps them in it. Secondly, it can let drivers learn about updates. For example, many drivers in Kazakhstan are unaware of alterations in traffic regulations, which happen once in a while and leads to disputes over fines, but this new approach in testing will seemingly help avoid such confrontations between drivers and police officers. Therefore, after analyzing these advantages, it is clear that resiting driving test makes sound sense.
Nevertheless, some politicians claim that this innovative approach has many drawbacks. To begin with, it will be an extra burden on the country budget. For instance, in Kazakhstan the current driving test occurs every ten years, and it fits in the budget, but if the new approach passes, they will have to seek money at the expense of other aspects of life, while will definitely create an resentment in society. Another disadvantage is that it can result in unnecessary inconvenience. This approach will lead to a loss in income, since drivers will have to take a few weeks off to prepare and resit the test every five years. On top of that, their employers will also experience discomfort every five years, because they will have to seek for a replacement while the worker is not at work due to this compulsory driving test. Hence, after considering all these disadvantages, it is evident that this approach also pose many problems.
In conclusion, although taking a driving every five years on the obligatory basis has plenty of advantages, it also has many drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97860962567 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70122297579 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534759358289 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1930777779 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15789473684 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276707987319 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771806027788 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575266550449 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166330411302 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297691049899 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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