The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The twin pictures describe several trasformations of a cinema in recent years.
Overal, it is clearly see that the layout of the cinema has changed significantly destination of the rooms over 40 years.
There has been a great deal of development of the movie theater. In 1980, this entertaiment area only had two film room, a ticket sold area, a drink next to it and a car park opposite the toilet. Now, there are 3 more cinema rooms have been built in the area. The car park have been replaced by the film room 2 and 3. The cinema 4 and cinema 5 are built on the one side of the 3 one, opposite the cinema 1. The cinema 1 is replaced by food drinks and relax room. The DVD shop have been built to use instead of the The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.drinks area. The toilet room is still remained the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seen'.
Suggestion: seen
...recent years. Overal, it is clearly see that the layout of the cinema has chang...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...de of the 3 one, opposite the cinema 1. The cinema 1 is replaced by food drinks and...
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Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...replaced by food drinks and relax room. The DVD shop have been built to use instead...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... shop have been built to use instead of the The pictures show the layout of a cinema in...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'The' is left.
Suggestion: the; The
... shop have been built to use instead of the The pictures show the layout of a cinema in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40449438202 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57362242419 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556179775281 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8842145884 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2727272727 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378241873966 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137014889 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124017280973 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20124680015 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111037730678 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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