Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible.
Nowadays, several countries believe that they should concentrate on producing foods supply for the people and transport it for the economy as little as possible. In my opinion, producing a variety of foods will ensure the nation’s food security.
There are several advantages when a nation has enough food for the people. Firstly, To have a large amount of food, governments should focus on developing agriculture which can resolve the unemployment problems. For example, In Indonesia, nearly half of the people work in the farming sector. Secondly, If a nation has capable to provide for all the citizens, both the Economy and Security will balance and develop strongly. Besides, mass production of all kinds of food items, a country can prepare for any worst disasters. For instance, in Vietnam, when a flood happens on the central side of the country, the government shall take the nation’s food which helps and encourage these unfortunate people to overcome this bad time. Moreover, Food import includes transportation costs, taxation, and other fees which increase the price of foods. This makes it the numerous people who have low income will hard to purchase food. Furthermore, imported food does not have the same quality and freshness as the local markets provide. If transport the food crates for a high distance and long period of time, the value of the food might degrade, and in some cases, toxic chemicals can appear when it expired.
In conclusion, A good nation is a country that they have well prepare for the food crisis, therefor goverment have authorite to produce mass foods for every households before deciding import.
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- the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 73
- Some people think that children should aim their best at what they are doing Others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- A University should accept male and female students equally 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1086, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ood crates for a high distance and long period of time, the value of the food might degrade, a...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
...nation is a country that they have well prepare for the food crisis, therefor goverment...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1375464684 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64917298307 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1946194326 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416894971305 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155248196179 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718320020639 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315739035381 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551958187449 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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