Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, the trend of trying to live together for a period of time has brought controversy for many people. While some assume that it can be beneficial for the youth to understand each other before getting married, others do not. In my view, I agree with the former opinion and I will further discuss this in this essay.
First and foremost, cohabitation is a good chance for the young to become real adults. When it comes to living together, it means that people in that house all need to take the responsibility to improve and keep it safe. Couples may equally share tasks in the house and learn to live in harmony. There is every likelihood that they will be helped improve their own daily living skills from the other, hence, when getting married, they will not find it difficult and hesitant.
Secondly, it is clear that cohabitation may give people an opportunity to discover other's sides that they did not know before. Their real character such as personal habits, lifestyles, and hobbies will be shown when they are at home. This helps the other to fully understand their boy or girlfriend and see if their personalities suit each other or not before deciding to get married. According to Pew Research Center, the majority of Americans, about 69%, think that cohabitation is acceptable and helpful even when they do not plan to get married.
In conclusion, I believe that cohabitation is a great way to know more about different aspects of the other which they do not show outside their home and it is advised to try living together before making a married decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... trend of trying to live together for a period of time has brought controversy for many people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77536231884 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55311153143 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.197356981 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245149589521 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892766354002 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672193124798 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150536622688 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701358064987 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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