Writing Task 2: Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is true that there are conflicting views about people posting their private information on Internet platforms for daily activities. While some find it convenient because the information could enable them to pay for food online or interact with their friend, in my opinion, it is a negative development since there are drawbacks behind it as hackers may make use of personal information and sell it to the third party.
Firstly, putting posts on modern platforms such as: Facebook, Instagram or Twitter has been a popular trend in the recent years. This action is very suitable for those who intend to buy or sell food online, especially in this period of Covid-19 pandemic. Furthermore, because of distancing, it would be hard for friends and relatives to meet each other face-to-face, and socializing on the Internet seems to be a good choice for everyone.
However, the danger from social network is beyond a doubt. When users demonstrate personal information on social platforms, hackers may pay attention to those and take information from them for their private purposes. Moreover, the information could also be used for bad intention. According to VnExpress report, in 2020, more than 1 million personal photos with private information posted on Facebook had been sold via a website called “Weewee” and the police had taken action to investigate further about it.
In conclusion, the advantage of networking can never be denied thanks to its convenience and benefits, nevertheless, the negative aspect in this kind of platform could be considered as a negative development.
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- The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007 73
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 78
- The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 56
- In some countries more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, third, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9336216698 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0561532854 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.3 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219107783594 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857412602691 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459422116039 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123404695488 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503453137796 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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