You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• describe the training course you want to do
• explain what the company could do to help you
• say how the course will be useful for your job
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in respect to the advertised course I saw online about management in the health and safety department.
The training course is about learning the rudiments involved in managing health and safety practices. It involves both virtual and hands on experience and it will hold for 6 weeks.
I would want our organization to help me achieve this in two ways. Firstly, I would want a little support financially to help me achieve this. Lastly, I would really appreciate if boma my colleague and friend can help me cover up for the time I will be absent.
This management in safety practice will afford me the opportunity to learn more about how health and safety managers regulate practices around the oil and gas industry in this our contemporary time. More so, it will expose me to state of the art equipment and in the long run I can increase my input at work so as to serve us better. I would be elated if my request is granted.
I await a positive response from you.
Yours sincerely,
Husain Alegimenlen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...ary time. More so, it will expose me to state of the art equipment and in the long run I can inc...
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Line 9, column 309, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ong run I can increase my input at work so as to serve us better. I would be elated if m...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, really, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73224043716 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6944601058 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0942434762 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157090325975 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619484810486 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344695693257 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859073468482 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319954917559 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.