Some people say History is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a debate whether history or some subjects like Science and Technology ought to be the crucial priorities in schools' curriculums. Despite the fact that history lessons convey students with many meaningful values, I genuinely believe that science and computer subjects are advantageous for society in the long term developments.
To begin with, historical events are part of human society. In some countries, by learning about the harsh war-time in the past, children could understand how much their ancestors had to suffer in the past. Thereby, they would value the peaceful lifetime they are having now. Furthermore, history lessons not only teach students about wars or political events but also provide them the overall view in a variety of aspects of life such as economy or industrial revolutions. For example, as school children study about the history of oil, they would have a deep insight about oil’s origin source or the way oil has become an important role in many industries.
This knowledge can be related to social issues in modern life.
On the other hand, science and technology help students keep pace with cutting-edge innovations. As the incessant development of the modern era, computers and Internet appear in most fields. Therefore, having skills to use advanced devices may create more chances for employment in the future. Besides, the study of Biology and Applied Science has helped humans endure and outlive some fatal diseases and viruses. Together, science and technology act as a precursor to coping with some global issues like exhausting natural resources or pollution.
To sum up, it is true that the study of history reminds us of our humble origin. Science and technology are the key that lead to the future of human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18402777778 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65246644115 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628472222222 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.350356585 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203414388637 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596006906264 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601870998731 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994873035067 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711674381342 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.