Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are some arguments in a topic that information should be free to access or should post some vital information privately to gain profits. Therefore, I will discuss both of the views and give brief comments for each statement in my essay.
Making an outcome of research publicly have plentiful benefits, when the exploration is free to access, a number of scientists who interested will take a hand in the process of the research. Moreover, some websites provides problems in specific subjects to attract intelligent people to solve those exercises and therefore organization can recruit those people to work for them. For example, Leetcode provides a plethora of coding problems that require users big knowledge of programming and mathematics as well as brainstorm skills to solve problems as fast as feasible.
However, little information related to creativity such as technology blueprint which has high tendency of imitate from other users in case of post it publicly. Those secret information has high effect on the total income of companies are difficult to leak out. For example, the recipe of spicy of KFC has been hiding from the public by the CEO and the head chef of KFC because of it special.
In summary, although accessing information to the public has many advantages, some research plays significant roles in companies that will affect detrimentally when leaking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20089285714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85426403516 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.727866208 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.444444444 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173444689511 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675619690832 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545574415487 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109736009249 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641342282873 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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