Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, sharing different information related to scientific, business, and the academic world among people is very useful. However, some people believe that this is a wrong method and that people should know everything. In my opinion, it is the right of ordinary people to know and read various scientific, business, and academic information, but not everything.
In all societies, governments prepare a very good situation for people to access the newest news and inventions. Not only can they improve the quality of their lives by knowing them, but they can also teach their children how to use and work with them. Additionally, sharing information about various subjects can help scientists become aware of their mistakes by gaining feedback from other people and repairing them.
On the other hand, there are some restrictions on sharing certain information. Scientists cannot share every detail because other countries may use it against them. For example, they cannot reveal military details and facilities due to security reasons. If enemies gain information related to their equipment, they can easily defeat them. Similarly, although different countries work hard to create and invent drugs for various illnesses, governments don't allow them to share this news freely.
In my opinion, it is true that there is some information that cannot be freely shared due to its value. However, in other subjects and issues, people should be made aware of events and news that occur.
In conclusion, people should know different news, information, and every detail about subjects such as the scientific, business, and academic world. However, there is some data that has to be withheld from ordinary people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rugs for various illnesses, governments dont allow them to share this news freely. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40148698885 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71751534504 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524163568773 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4877752448 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234069335265 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910303672499 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672276477947 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144965677042 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526950840439 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.