Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
undoubtedly sharing different information related to scientific, business and the academic word among people is very useful, to some according believe that this is a wrong method and people should know everything. In my opinion, it is the right of ordinary people to know and read various scientific, business and academic information but not everything.
in all society governments prepare a very good situation for people who live there to access newest news and invention and access them. Not only can they improve the quality of their life by knowing them but also, they can teach their children how to use and work with. In addition, by sharing information about various subjects can help scientists to aware of their mistake by gain feedbacks from other people and repair it.
on the other hand, there are some restrictions which scientists cannot share every information because if they share such details other countries use it against themselves. For example, they cannot reveal military details and facilities because of their anomy. If the anomy gain information related to their equipment’s can defeat them easily. Although different countries work hard to create and invention drugs for various illnesses the governments don't allow them to share this news.
In my opinion, it is true that there is some information which cannot share freely because of their valuable. But in other subjects and issues people should aware about events and news that happened.
In conclusion, people should know different news, information, and every detail about subjects such as scientific, business, and academic world but there are some data have to cover from ordinary people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
undoubtedly sharing different information related t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...demic information but not everything. in all society governments prepare a very ...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'access the newest'.
Suggestion: access the newest
... situation for people who live there to access newest news and invention and access them. Not...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...acks from other people and repair it. on the other hand, there are some restrict...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and facilities because of their anomy. If the anomy gain information related to t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s for various illnesses the governments dont allow them to share this news. In my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28358208955 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64839170335 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496268656716 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9318539363 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240351331904 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970639322673 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778922927157 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147139068184 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587628731244 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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