Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There can be no doubt that the topic of globalisation is one which deserves some analysis. It is the opinion of this writer that completely advocates the idea that each country should focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries because one country has no guarantee of having enough resources to help another country and each country will have different economic policies.
One country has no guarantee of having enough resources to help another country. Wasting natural resources in foreign affairs is pointless if that country can not even solve its own problems. To illustrate, India is a country with many economic problems , but they desire to provide resources to a pooner country, resulting in India becoming the poorest country in the world. This is because countries should use resources to fix their own economy first then help other countries later. Thus, one country has no guarantee of having enough resources to help another country.
Each country will have different economic policies. Different countries have different solutions to problems that may not be relevant to other countries’ problems. To exemplify, Vietnam has policies to solve economic problems, but in Japan, Vietnam’s policies will not be suitable for this country. This is because each country has a different development and solution, so the policies are hardly suitable. Therefore, each country have different economic policies to helping other countries.
It can be seen that one country has no guarantee of having enough resources to help another country and each country will have different economic policies. To conclude, this writer agrees with the idea that each country should focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is a country with many economic problems , but they desire to provide resources to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, even so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36462093863 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63881714675 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397111913357 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0701546161 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416686223581 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196519529004 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112126636278 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332038794183 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657932220313 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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