The charts below show the types of work occupied by people from Province A and Province B in England
The chart given provides comparison of the types of work that English in Province A and Provience B do .
It can be seen that the most popular type of work in The chart given provides a comparison of the types of work that English in Province A and Province B do.
It can be seen that the most popular type of work in Province A is Business and that in Province B is Domestic service, whose proportions are almost identical, occupy 70% and 67% respectively. While the other jobs are the least popular in both provinces A and B, send 2% and 3% each.
We can see that the percentages of people who do architecture job in two provinces are the same, which are the second places with 20% of total.
So far as the second place was concerned, there was 8% who choose domestic in province A, while in province B, the proportion of business occupied 10%, a gap of just 2%.
Overall, the most popular type of work in this province is the second least popular one in that city
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...English in Province A and Provience B do . It can be seen that the most popular...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en that the most popular type of work in The chart given provides a comparison of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39010989011 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52520513883 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467032967033 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2367498655 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395569505245 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212657949416 0.103423049105 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888839492241 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230373819646 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832077688611 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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