The table shows the number of international tourist arrivals in thousands in various countries in 2009 and 2010 together with the percentage change in these numbers

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The table shows the number of international tourist arrivals (in thousands) in various countries in 2009 and 2010, together with the percentage change in these numbers.

The table illustrates the amount of international tourists who arrived in many countries from 2008 to 2010 with the proportion change in numbers.

Overall, the number of French tourists was the highest in 2009 comparing to the lowest that of Hongkong. In 2010, France and Hongkong still remained as the countries with the top and bottom number of tourists respectively. However, the change in percentage of German tourists took the most, while Hongkong took the least.

In 2009, there were 76 thousand tourists traveling to France, following that was USA (66 thousand), Spain and UK were equal with 55 thousand. In Italy, the average tourist number was 44, whereas the amount in Turkey, China and Germany were 32, 22 and 10 respectively. The last was Hongkong with 10 thousand tourists.

In 2010, there were some changes in the given table. Although most countries still remained in their places, the proportion of UK tourists were then higher than that of Spain by 1 thousand. For Italy, this nation has also experienced the fact that its tourists is short of 1 thousand compared to that of Turkey.

About the change in numbers, Germany was the highest with 109%, after it are China and Turkey and respectively. The other countries experienced the percentage of change around 3.6 and 0. Hongkong was the most special with -11% in its change.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 109%, after it are China and Turkey and respectively. The other countries experi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, still, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98672566372 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61666092608 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508849557522 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9485882468 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6923076923 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365934068101 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13420879132 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722363423879 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211771563955 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678038435141 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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