The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the process of a home smokery and how to use it at home.
Looking at the process, what stands out from the graph is that there are a total of 3 stages of the process of the home smokery beginning with the flow of the fresh air and culminating in the smoke to cook meats.
The first stage is when the fresh air is flown into the home smokery which is covered by a lid to start to form smoke. After that, some logs are put into and mixed with the fresh air to form fire which can form smoke.
After the fire has made smoke, the smoke is flown into the pipe which is led to the ground level and stayed in the box. Following this, meats are hooked up in the box. The process finishes when the meats are cooked by the smoke which is made from the previous stages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
... out from the graph is that there are a total of 3 stages of the process of the home ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 633.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08387096774 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.86450496704 2.65546596893 70% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496774193548 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.331225401 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704320468289 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417840135333 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604532505269 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657749684861 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661578085653 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 11.4140731707 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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