Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Living in the information age, while some people think that newspaper platform is the best way to catch up on the news, others believe that they can learn a lot of news through other media platforms. In my opinion, although learning various platforms is better, we need to filter information to keep the good news for ourselves.
A growing body of research suggests that traditional newspapers have a generally positive effect on our knowledge. One key benefit is that individuals can completely apply and enhance all good news which passed the censor before publishing in society. This can lead to an increase in knowledge and positive in mind. Taking Turkey as an example, the governments should suggest their citizens to choose any reputable newspaper platform to catch up on the news instead of yellow journalism platforms.
However, learning the news on various media platforms is also good.One prominent issue is that people need to filter the news which are posted on the mass media, because most news are not censored by any authorities. Therefore, if people do not check the authenticity of the information, they can easily get the fake news. For instance, during COVID-19 pandemic, according to the VnExpress, one of the most reputable newspapers in Vietnam, there are a plethora of fake news which have been published on mass media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram or even tabloids. Through that, people only choose to get news on at least Berliner, instead, they trust all news which are published on such platforms. Even numerous journalists can accept to lose their professional ethics to exaggerate their news to get more views than before.
In conclusion, in the Internet era, everything is easier than before and there are more platforms to have a deep understanding of the real reality of the world. In my opinion, I suppose that we are not misled by any journalists or newspapers, instead, we should actively choose the news we can get and enable them to apply our knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...on various media platforms is also good.One prominent issue is that people need to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, at least, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04504504505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77104125928 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516516516517 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0569189152 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365885743539 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128576739093 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135068189702 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228488599743 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173597908068 0.056905535591 305% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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