Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is indisputable that, international tourism has been developing with speed rapidly and being considered the biggest industry in an accelerating pace of globalization these days. However, there are variety of arguments regarding the perception of humankind in the interference between particular civilization from many nations in the world. From my point of view, this issue should be taken into account before a final decision is come to.
On the one hand, approaching various culture from international tourism is adequate remedy for bringing lots of benefits and useful information for domestic people and foreign tourist. First and foremost, the collaboration between nations together is truly selection to enhance the recognition of each individuals in comprehending the ethnic of each nation. Apparently could be seen, VietNam is one the most nations has been exploring this matter effectively by advertising lots prestigious landscapes, historical monuments and even famous regional food on the world, and hence, promoting diplomatic relationship more compact. In addition, especially the youth could be updated and studied more the latest trends. Absorbing the lots of new information is also the effective solution in advertising and sharing many interesting things of each nation through medias.
On the other hand, various unexpected hazards has also appeared which make this matter become exacerbating. To begin, some organisations has trick the foreign tourist by sophisticated expedients. Tricking money, usurping the furniture of tourists even selling the commodities with high costs could be the main culprits which create a bad impression in conception of national-friends. Secondly, this issues become more perilous than when some reactionaries abuse visiting of foreign tourist to offer the misleading information and images relating nation. It is imperative for government should enact law punishingly to chastise people have evil behaviours.
In conclusion, I diametrically agree with above idea, but I believe that there will be more benefits in the future from developing international tourism industry if humankind comprehend and cope with this matter effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77777777778 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18088761662 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3851513469 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153664300624 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483098792455 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586414313394 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104580630287 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512378903175 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.