Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent years, the trend has been changed towards music and songs. A section of society thought that music contribute to make connection between people from various regions with different school of thought and history. I partially agree with this statement, in the course of essay, I will describe my arguments.
On the one hand, music and songs other forms of singing are able to make a path in people who understand language and people share their thought and ideas with help music. In this way people store their values and point which they want to deliver to others. In a region, music is created according to their values and culture, and other side of the world individual listen to entertain to them self, they will use to with that culture. Similarly, it transfers from one generation to next generation. For example, these days most of the members of the society did not see last century activity but with music we use to with that time.
On the other hand it has few limitations that's why it is not enough to store cultures. The different areas had different kind of languages and restrictions. Music does not have one language because in a country, people speak different dialect. For instance, Pakistan have four provinces with different languages which is main hurdal, to transfer culture with help of music, and some country have religion restrictions.
In conclusion, music is a way to communicate between those countries how had same language and same level of under standing, however, it is not effective those regions how are different from others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...n the other hand it has few limitations thats why it is not enough to store cultures....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93233082707 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55511909979 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1097170846 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256204029568 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885021671063 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549050683129 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148246378175 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496114549801 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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