In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case?
What can be done about this problem?
In recent years, agriculture had seen significant improvement towards the production of food, with cutting edge technology however nowadays, people are facing number of problem related to food including poverty and child hunger in some region. In the course of the essay, I will describe the situation and the solutions.
Firstly, In those regions where masses have shortage of food and other basic body needs because those countries do not have more advance agriculture methods. In all over the world are not appropriate weather conditions which are suitable to those crops and less information about crops cultivation. For example, In those areas like deserts and mountains are good for crops and people are unable to grow basic things because they do not have methods to produce vegetables and other things. Secondly, the population is also problem towards hunger. In some countries had large difference in ratio of population and harvesting area.
However, these problems have solution which can reduce food issues in these areas, to providing training to those people about how to grow crops effectively. With this experience people are able to know which crop gives good production. Secondly, give modren equipment that can convert their land from less productive to more productive. If they facilities to develop to create indoor farming then they are able to grow any kind crop, while weather condition does not affect on indoor farming. In addition, this problem may solve by giving them some financial assistance than they are able to buy some fertilizer.
In conclusion this kind of caused by some local and natural issues while it might me solve to giving them technology training and financial support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5828505352 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5129897173 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13077365132 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455639245702 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338862999819 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729464982042 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270144667143 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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