Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the trend has been changed toward education priorities. A section of society thought that history is primary course of education which gives more knowledge, although others argue that, these days our lives depend on science and cutting edge technology which drives to future instead of history which leads to backword. I believe that both had their own importance and in the course of the essay, I will discuss both view points.
Firstly, History is that subject which reveals information about human and the evolution of science progress. Science is not nowadays subject it started even pre historic era. From that time tech innovation started which is based of modern tech. If we place those things on side of table then nothing will left because each innovation and facilities developed on the basis of past exprience. For example jet engine had designed to solved historic problems, speed and efficiency. In addition, human life improvement we know because historien record it if this subject do not exist then we unfimiliar with our history.
However, Science and technology is primary key for future because most of the product are develop for future. Most of the innovation are done by these two area of study. If students do learn science then the process of innovating things will stop. Many of future problem will unsolved without continuation of tech era. Most of the facilities, we are using today are developed by contribution of Science.
In conclusion, History is based of those informations which help to make today's science although tech subjects are contributed in producing useful things. In my opinion without both subject over education is incomplete because both have their own value.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...ings on side of table then nothing will left because each innovation and facilities ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
... future because most of the product are develop for future. Most of the innovation are ...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on are done by these two area of study. If students do learn science then the proc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16725978648 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59663111156 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1451533088 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238084479528 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696597546028 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624301658127 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147286524345 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584902882435 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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