Some people think that quality art can be made by anyone while others think that it requires talent and ability. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
It is argued by a number of people that everyone is capable of making high-end art, whereas, others believe that the first prerequisites for an artist are talent and ability. From my own perspective, I advocate the notion that everybody can create artistic product, however,
On the one hand, it is sufficiently apparent that with practice, individual is able to skillfully perform everything and art falls firmly within this sphere. To illustrate, an amature will be conscious of each movement and try to follow exactly to the theoretical guideline which, engenders akward maneuver and therefore results in unexpected outcome. Professionals, on the contrary, automatically execute with precision as if it was inherently coded in their gene as they have countlessly repeated that action. For example, Bob Ross, who used to be a carpenter and had lost a finger, had proven everyone can draw via detailed tutorial video, in which he had effortlessly finished spectacular paintings with a few strokes of brushes.
On the other hand, an art constitutes a high-quality product when it possesses the depth, unique traits, implications, advanced technique and especially the soul, which can only be breathed into the creation by a talented artist. A starter might replicate the image of a drawings, nonetheless, experts can tell the counterfeited and real one apart through sensation that they bring. For instance, one of Leonardo Da Vinci’s priceless paintings, who is an artist in the renaissance and renowned for his astonishingly capacity in surrealism, Mona Lisa have been redrawn by numerous people. However, none of those can successfully emulate her mysterious smile.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the fact that art can be made by anybody as long as they have undergone training, an one-of-a-kind counterpart can only be performed by the talent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34931506849 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16251501494 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657534246575 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5923381179 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.2 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153598783121 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588777953024 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550482806566 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107011299591 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045196616857 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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