Your local government has just recently received a large donation from an anonymous donor to improve
the community. Almost everyone agrees that the money should be invested in building a new public
facility. Which of the following do you think your local government should build?
- Build a public library
- Build a public park
- Build a public pool
Use specific reasons and examples to support your essay. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use
memorized examples.
All the three options for building a public space are very much appropriate. In my opinion I firmly believe that a public park should be built. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, due to more of construction and housing development projects taking place nowadays there are very few parks or playgrounds for childrens to play. So having a public park would ensure that the childrens have a place to play in their evening time post doing their daily chores of school and studies. This would help them to get refreshed and have a break from the normal routine. As we say, all work and no play will make Jack a dumb boy. So playing and exploring yourselves is as necessary as studying. I would like to give my own example, when I visited my sisters house for my holidays there I used to accompany my nephew to the park everyday in the evening. This helped us both to engage ourselves and also created a strong bond between us. So I think that public park should be built for childrens to play.
Public park is also necessary for the elders because many of us in the new world believe in staying fit and healthy. Public park would be a place where all the youngsters and elders go for their morning walk and jogging. Parks are also a great place for old elderly people like our grandparents to have a get-together. They tend to go out and meet their friends in the park and have a good time. When I was in my undergrad, I used to daily go for a morning jog keeping my health in mind. This would not only help me stay fit but also the fresh morning breeze and the rays of sun helped me to stay active the whole day. I used to see many old people performing laughter therapy, sharing about their daily life with their friends and having a good time in the park. Due to the new technological world most of the grandchildrens don't have a conversation with their grandparents so parks become a place for them to jell up with their friends and have a good time as they are not that tech savvy. In this way the public park would help the youngsters to be fit and healthy and the elderly people to have a break from their daily life.
In conclusion I would like to state that the local government should build a public park which would be a place for the kids to play and enjoy after their whole day's hectic schedule and would be refresher for them. And it would act as a place for morning walk and jog for the youngsters and adults for staying fit and healthy and a place for elderly adults laughter club and get together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 644, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...used to accompany my nephew to the park everyday in the evening. This helped us both to ...
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Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ogical world most of the grandchildrens dont have a conversation with their grandpar...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...fit and healthy and a place for elderly adults laughter club and get together.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35789473684 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38448912047 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425263157895 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9316651182 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0909090909 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5909090909 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829507155504 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033772074415 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402100793111 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688962795016 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246597946037 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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