The diagram below shows the changes to the town of Seaville.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the re-development of Seaville town from 1995 until the present day.
Overall, the town has changed considerably, especially with the appearance of the leisure facilities in the north west and the disappearance of the fishing harbor in the south.
In 1995, the town mostly consisted of houses located along the main road. To the east of the town, there were merely a vast forest park and farmland. Below them were a small hotel and a café. A fishing community was formed in the south with a fishing port, fish market and shop chains along the road.
At present, the town is significantly different than it was in the past. A golf course and tennis courts have been constructed in the east, replacing the former forest park and agricultural area. On the seafront, the fishing port has been completely demolished; the fish market has been transformed into a cluster of apartments, and the shop chain converted into restaurants. However, the other local facilities have undergone minor adjustments. There have been more housing in the residential area on the side of the road, and the hotel has been attached to a new car park. The café in the south east remains untouched.
- The table below gives information about the values NZ of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The graph gives information about the number of people in Australia who used Chinese Arabic Italian or Greek as their first mother tongue Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- People say that reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills than watching TV To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...nt, the town is significantly different than it was in the past. A golf course and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87192118227 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74741743375 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556650246305 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7670601658 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4166666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0888178664153 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366624523986 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421912233976 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720931412955 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412735528693 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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