College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Selecting a college major is one of the vital task that help students to shape and direct their career path. Opting for a relevant course is important for students to direct themselves in the right path. Not thinking properly at the time of selection, would diverge their career path in a direction where students might get bored or frustrated. Therefore, I believe the choices of the field of study in the college should be made with scrutiny and not simply thinking about the current job scenario.
One doesn't have to think a lot while selecting the subjects in the school, while in the college, on the other hand, it's vital to select the cources of one's liking. Otherwise, if the student selects a wrong course, would have to cope up with the subject's complications. In doing so, the student would not be able to score better grades and thus will result in a incompitent job. A student, for instance, have a penchant in computer science and technologies, if selects a cource related to history or anything irrelevant to his likings - which has a good job opportunities in the present time, would have to face difficulties in learning the subject because that subject will appear trite and boring. Moreover, it's important for the student to score good marks in order to placed in a better job. However, the student won't be able to get good marks because of his interests.
In addition to this, the students who opt for the subjects concomitted to the better job opportunities instead of keeping their interests aside will not be able to contribute any innovative and ingineous ideas to their field of study. For instance, if Lata Mangeshkar - renowed Indian singer, would have choiced for studying then she wouldn't have contributed to the world with several famous songs. Because she opted for what she likes, she was able to persieve it consummately and was able to think differently than others. Henceforth, the sudents should decide their subjects by considering all the factors and think sagaciously.
To sum, according to the aforementioned points, it's cogent to select the college major according to your likings and interests rather then considering the current availability of the jobs, otherwise, it raise frustrations and feeling of incompetency in the students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00526315789 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79160712949 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507894736842 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0968591216 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247212999913 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849752600011 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791632203897 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145707149683 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846974947032 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.