College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of
jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most
compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The choice of the field of study is always a difficult one to make, since that decision will lay the foundation for your future. This could easily be the best decision of your
life on the other hand you may resent this day for the rest of your life. In this essay, I will provide my thoughts on why a college student should always base their
choice of a field to study on the interest and not the job market.
Although the idea of following the crowd is less risky, considering the fear of being jobless but it can lead to a stressful or unsuccessful life as well. There are a
lot of advantages of choosing the field that you love, since the driving force will be the passion to know more, leading to a better understanding of the field,
resulting in improved performance and faster growth. For instance, would it be possible for madam mary curie to teach the world about radio active materials if
she had choosen chemistry as her choice of field? No, she was able to do it because she loved what she did and had channelized her energy to know more and more
even if this desire was killing her.
Conversely, most students take a logical approach while choosing their career path. They compare the fields by comparing the current or increasing popularity
in the world thus killing the original version of themselfs, trying to fit in the society by trimming their choices based on statistics. The outcome of such decisions
are stressful life, less efficiency in work and slow growth. If we extrapolate the effects of stress from work place, we can include the effect this has on
personal life as well. One factor to consider here is that the job market is volatile, changing as I write this essay, the worker always needs to keep themselfs
updated with the current trends and shifts or else the risk of losing the job is more, for example at present we are experiencing a job market shift from a manual work,
where certain skills were given atmost importance, to an automated operation requring only programming skills. This shift is the reason people who developed certain
skills and are a master of it, are sitting jobless while the programmers are taking over multiple jobs at the same time.
To sum it up, the phase "do what you love and love what you do" makes even better sense, love for something is an excellent motivator to be the best in it and considering
the job market who won't want the best?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6558891455 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4401568234 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549653579677 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0894253153 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9285714286 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208653267662 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724302601028 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634033099967 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065925503947 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603696860146 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.