Claim Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system Reason Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts or minds

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...t be solved by the laws and legal system , and as a reason he states that laws can...
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...the crime occuring in the modern society . I mostly agree with the author , howe...
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...ciety . I mostly agree with the author , however a law is always required to pun...
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...ys required to punish the wrong doings. Firstly , crimes increasing these days ...
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...to punish the wrong doings. Firstly , crimes increasing these days like acid...
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... punish the wrong doings. Firstly , crimes increasing these days like acid a...
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... increasing these days like acid attacks,rape and cyber bullying are occuring inspite...
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...pite of the plethora of laws on the same .people are aware of the illeagal and imm...
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...y are determined in taking their revenge , or getting the physical satisfaction th...
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...r getting the physical satisfaction that they often ignore the result of those cr...
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...ften ignore the result of those crimes. they are pushed by thier inner feelings and ...
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...s and laws seem ineffective in such case . Secondly , another unsolvable probl...
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... ineffective in such case . Secondly , another unsolvable problem that the mod...
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...diction of the internet and social media . The use of the smartphones and internet...
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...asing the depression among the teenagers , divorce among the married couples and ...
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...depression among the teenagers , divorce among the married couples and the feelin...
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...ng of detachment from their younger ones among the older ones. these are the pr...
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...r younger ones among the older ones. these are the problems that the law and legal...
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... law and legal system cannot eradicate. these are not crimes theses are just human he...
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...n which individual stays effect the most . so such problems can be so solved more ...
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...hich individual stays effect the most . so such problems can be so solved more eff...
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... by good parenting or good moral support.. Finally, Although laws cannot change...
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...lly, Although laws cannot change peoples mind and force the people with depressio...
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...e the people with depression to be happy , but law can stop cyber bullying , it ...
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...people with depression to be happy , but law can stop cyber bullying , it cannot...
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...pression to be happy , but law can stop cyber bullying , it cannot guess who is ...
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...appy , but law can stop cyber bullying , it cannot guess who is trying to do som...
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... can atleast punish them and warn others . In conclusion , law is not the only...
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...them and warn others . In conclusion , law is not the only entity that can so...
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...lusion , law is not the only entity that can solve the problems existing in the ...
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...w is not the only entity that can solve the problems existing in the society , a...
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...ve the problems existing in the society , a invidual himself need to be aware of ...
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... the problems existing in the society , a invidual himself need to be aware of hi...
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... circle themself with positive people to influence positive environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95356037152 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48199990292 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532507739938 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8423794457 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487645938798 0.243740707755 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182699698446 0.0831039109588 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203325414017 0.0758088955206 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216588674694 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193146163623 0.0667264976115 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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