In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In few nations, the people want to owing home more than renting house. Owing home all time is important but my option it depends on where do they live, each of option they have advantage differently.
In many countries, or big city, the people need to pay money to buy the land , it is so expensive, so many young people want to rent a block rather spend a lot of money on this, they will rent the house in 40-50 years.
Example in Ho Chi Minh city or Ha Noi city, many people from other provinces come there to work, so they will rent apartment or house during they work here.
In other hand, in the countryside, the land more cheaper so people want tp buy the land and biuld the house. Also it depends on culture, some countries as Vietnam, China, Japan, Korean, the people want to owing home rather renting a apartment because they believe that the success people should have house, care and good work.
In conclusion, few countries, the people want to owing home rather renting one. But in my opinion, it depends on where do they live and what is there requirement. Both of this have advantage and dis advantage base on the people thought, price and culture
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In few nations, the people want to owing home m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e do they live, each of option they have advantage differently. In many countrie...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...people need to pay money to buy the land , it is so expensive, so many young peopl...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...ther hand, in the countryside, the land more cheaper so people want tp buy the land and biul...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nt tp buy the land and biuld the house. Also it depends on culture, some countries a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eople want to owing home rather renting a apartment because they believe that the...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'housed'.
Suggestion: housed
...eve that the success people should have house, care and good work. In conclusion, fe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47887323944 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23796165196 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0995880955 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232002779856 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111954942525 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714258679681 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137984421394 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577067507571 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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