Government should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Stepping into 21st century, most governments have significant roles in controlling and developing countries. In each growing up economy, science and science-related stuff are concerned by the large number of citizens. As a part of community, I totally agree that politicians should have responsibility to manage their scientific articles and research. Below are a couple of reasons in my school of thought, followed by its influence.
The first fact to note is that government is reputable enough to implement this role. As far as I know, most of government's recognized products have high-quality and are safe to use. Thus, it can be said that the research in the experiment should be exposed and judged by government's professional system. Indeed, after conducting a comprehensive evaluation, government will expose the qualified scientific research results, leading to increase in the quality of these articles and research.
In tackling that issue, it is a point that humans can not prevent corruption in all of the private organizations. Today, there are numerous profit or non-profit organizations in the community. it is fairly difficult to distinguish and moderate their operation. Some of them may be clear in their financial report, however, others seem to be unbelievable because of untrustable statements. Therefore, it could be better if government can control scientific research to reduce fraud from these spontaneous.
To sum up, taking into consideration all of the above-mentioned facts, it is obvious that scientific research is the asset of every country. Not only grey matter authors are, it also a vital knowledge for citizens that government should remain and develop for future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45112781955 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26357365426 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0860791445 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277338228296 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762221938423 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647647358348 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149394986633 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178091976531 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.