Do you agree with the following statement? Nowadays, it's easier to maintain good health than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, health plays a significant role in people's daily lives in many of the places where they work or play. Some people think that in the past, people could maintain a good health relatively easier than the present, while others do not believe so. Both sides may have their own reasons to support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that the present society provides a better environment for people to maintain a good health. There are several reasons as follows.
First of all, there are many clinics and hospitals available around us and medical knowledge and skills has improved than before. These environments are likely to help people be physically healthy. A good example that illustrates my point would be the enhancement of medical knowledge and skills available in the past and present. Recently, my mother that had a difficulty in walking straight went to a clinic. The doctor said that her nervous system got hurt for some reasons and it is difficult to alleviate the symptom. The only way that the doctor mentioned was just to bear with it. My mother did not give up. She went to a university hospital that has profound professors having expertise in their respective fields. A professor that she visited told her that recently, new medicine which could be effective to her symptom was invented even though it was a little bit expensive. My mother started taking the new medicine, and now she is okay with her walking. If she were in the past before when the medicine was invented, she could not have been able to walk straight.
In addition, people in the present do more exercise than before, which contribute to improving their physical health. Commonly in society, there are many sports centers such as gym, swimming pool, and playgrounds around us. People who care about their appearance easily can go to gyms to work out. Such exercises enable them to have a better health condition. For example, my cousin used to suffer from obesity and diabetes. He lived a sedentary life by spending the whole day reading books, playing video games, and watching movies. One day, he realized that he needs to work out for a better health condition. Thanks to a gym that was only five minutes away from his home by walk, he was able to start workout very easily. Eventually, he lost around ten kilograms and regained a normal weight as well as diabetes was alleviated. Without the gym near his home, he would not have been able to maintain a good health condition.
All things considered, I adamantly believe that it is easier to keep a good health condition in the present than in the past. All in all, the importance of the development of medical technologies and the accessibility of exercise facilities cannot be overestimated in health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 864, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...mptom was invented even though it was a little bit expensive. My mother started taking the...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ties cannot be overestimated in health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82426778243 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59057995388 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539748953975 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0172342134 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3571428571 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46428571429 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207754420142 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513714600674 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508796867592 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130842169908 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401337217792 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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