People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face.
What are the reasons for this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
It is true that currently people prefer interacting online to talking to other people face to face. Although I acknowledge a negative side of this trend, I believe that, overall, this is a positive development.
With respect to downside of this is communication skills of young generation. If youngsters were to use mobile phones to communicate and chat each other, their communicative attitude would see great damage; which means that they may have difficulties in socializing with others in society.This leads to people's suffering a lot and some even may commit suicide because of their data's misuse
As for the positive of the trend first and foremost, the rise in the online interaction was brought about by the advancement of internet facilities. One of the major factors is that internet enables individuals to talk to one another regardless of their geographic location at a lower cost and within a matter of seconds. Those who are leading a life with a tight budget or professionals being obliged to meet strict deadlines may enjoy these amenities. Another motivation is that not visit shopping malls, not only can consumers save their precious time and money but they would also contribute to the preservation and protection of the environment. There are many benefits that people could gain from the advanced technologies.
On the basis of points mentioned above, it can be concluded that communicate online is a more positive development than negative. Due to the benefits it entails we can turn a blind eye to the drawback of it
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07058823529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95571829935 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.773688212 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.3 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312477080738 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110682402458 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126368639487 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190866735742 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160128414123 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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