In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
With the rapid development of technology, the traffic system will soon be equipped with state-of-the-art facilities and driverless vehicles may dominate the transportation in the coming years. However, I personally believe this trend is detrimental rather than beneficial and my opinion will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, vehicles without drivers may help reduce the number of road accidents. This is because transport including cars, buses and trucks will be pre-programmed and equipped with automatic system. Therefore, no more careless or drunk drivers can cause unwanted accidents. What is more, proper guidance of directions or information will also be precisely given by the artificial intelligence system placed within in the transport.
On the other hand, there appear to be a loads of disadvantages when it comes to driveless vehicles. First and foremost, there will be a rise in the unemployment rate as not only driver but also the assistant is not recruited. Moreover, fewer people will opt for a driver license since vehicles are driverless which may considerably affect some driving companies. Another problem with automatic transport is in case of sudden technical problems, passengers will not be able to deal with them in the absence of the assistant or driver. To simply put, the existence of vehicles' operator is indispensable.
In conclusion, although driverless vehicles bring about a few benefits to the future transport system, we can not deny the importance of drivers and assistants. Thus, the co-operation between human's experience and technology will signigficantly assist the development of transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a load' or simply 'loads'?
Suggestion: a load; loads
... On the other hand, there appear to be a loads of disadvantages when it comes to drive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51181102362 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21381403588 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1899982914 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327813210784 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108725406349 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605943786912 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192280312124 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560700103101 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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