In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
although the world is witnessing the quick progress of agriculture, the residents in many nations are under the famine. there are several reasons for this phenomenon, and we can take numerous steps to handle this issue.
The first reason for people in many countries going hungry is for the weather condition. In some nations espicially African and Middle east countries, the weather is too severe that people can hardly grow rice or alternative trees for food despite the growth of mordern agriculture. This leads to the increase in the price of food trees, and the poor people cannot afford to buy these produces, resulting famine dizaster. The second cause of famine is that some countries survive mainly thanks to sporsor from international organizations, and the anvance of agriculture around the world cannot reach these countries. When the sources of sponsors are not always enough to feed all the residents of these tertiaries.
In spite of certain difficulties, Goverments in these countries could take several steps to solve the problems. Firstly, developed countries could send experts to these countries to teach the residents the ways to implement new technology in farmings. When the experts come to these countries, they cound study the methods to deal with the harsh weather, and give the correct instruction for farmers to have better crops. Secondly, governments in these poor countries should think of the alternative ways to develop the economy, so that they no longer depends on sponsors. Since the country is richer, they can import rice and alternative food from other countries to handle the famine issue.
In conclusion, hunger in many nations is caused by a lack of control over climatic circumstances and a reliance on sporsors, and these two issues may be addressed by the advice of professionals in wealthy countries and the expansion of their economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the world cannot reach these countries. When the sources of sponsors are not always ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1868852459 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76341904457 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2048591408 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.692307692 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136804299634 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05148886161 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494475971414 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939340129354 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639308154271 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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