Full- time university students need to spend a lot of time on studying, but it is essential to get involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is not questionable education plays a vital role in their life whereas students has very aware about his studies. thus, it depends on students studying what they have chosen in the subjects and even they can capabilities to handle others skills. I am going to partial side so there are plethora reasons behind this. I will talk about my points in upcoming paragraph.
First and foremost, in these days education is third eye of human beings but also so many pressure about his parents wants my child do best things in any activities . Therefore, one and mostly turn point students had passed out 12 class or they would chance to will create his life in own way because adolescent know about her/him self what can they proof their knowledge nor hard work in their passion so youngsters do better for way.
Moving forwarding, youth has option choosing what they wants in their studies if they are do some other skills. For instance, out door games, part time jobs, online jobs, dance, sing whatever they would be interest so they can easily involve in any activities. Moreover, senior has selecting which subjects and field good his career when they must engage for us while they can do another skills.
All said and done I reckon, education system is very necessary part of life so parents don't want to pressure rise to olny option to choose this subjects. thus, they are very drawbacks of kid life but even they cannot show their interest any skills. Meanwhile, juvenile want to do in their life to giving to allow then see what they can living life in amazing ways without any pressure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, thus, whereas, while, for instance, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78853046595 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28642845986 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6560548515 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100311415924 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409149743873 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396451347102 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671455196529 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274654261314 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.