Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that these days we have a lot of choices, and it is hard for making decisions. I partly agree with this opinion for some reasons which are outlined in this essay.
On the one hand, I understand why some people think that we have a large number of decisions when thinking about a problem in our life. The first reason worth mentioning is it appears regularly in practical activities such as eating, shopping or travel. Every morning, when getting up, we also think what breakfast we are going to eat. Nowadays, there are a lot of tourist attractions, if we plan a tour, we have to think about destination, transportation, and route so we have multitude of choices to make you seesaw. In addition, there is a development in business. Corporations or companies are likely to globalize and diversify their products. The products are manufactured with a variety of shapes, functions or prices, as a result, customers feel difficult when they choose things they want.
On the other hand, I hold a belief that something just has one or two choices even no chance to solve a particular problem. Cancer, for example, if you suffer from this disease, you just get medicine for the rest of your life even death if you are diagnosed late. Another example is passion, when people are born, they cannot choose their talent, their things they love to play. The passion is grown during developing process of people and come to a particular age, they recognize and focus on this passion.
To conclude, although it cannot be denied that there is some problems solved with several ways even no way, I am of opinion that we have a lot of choices in a majority of sectors in these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tand why some people think that we have a large number of decisions when thinking about a problem...
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Line 2, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...make you seesaw. In addition, there is a development in business. Corporations or...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some problems'?
Suggestion: there are some problems
...lude, although it cannot be denied that there is some problems solved with several ways even no way, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6711409396 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62428980614 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5915952571 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217088061646 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645370396277 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598040429857 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124340640332 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373345070987 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.